Hello my dear beta reader!
This is a temporary home for my webcomic MIDAIR - Memories from the Lost Times.
Thank you for becoming my beta reader.
Here are some tips on what I'm looking for in feedback:
Did the first chapter get your attention? Would you read more of this story?
What did you like, dislike, miss in the story (chapter), What made sense, and what did not?
The only text from the chapter drafts that will be in the webcomic will be the dialog.
Descriptions don't need to be well-written prose. If it makes no sense let me know but don’t bother with fixing it.
But if you think the dialog sounds unnatural I'd love to know.
Please click the download button to get the draft for the FIRST CHAPTER.