Hello my dear beta reader!

This is a temporary home for my webcomic MIDAIR - Memories from the Lost Times.

Thank you for becoming my beta reader.

Here are some tips on what I'm looking for in feedback: 

What did you like, dislike, miss in the story (chapter), What made sense, and what did not?

Did the chapter leave you with any questions? 

What do you think of the newly introduced characters?

 

The only text from the chapter drafts that will be in the webcomic will be the dialog.

Descriptions don't need to be well-written prose. If it makes no sense let me know but don’t bother with fixing it.

But if you think the dialog sounds unnatural I'd love to know.

 

 

Please click the download button to get the draft for the SECOND CHAPTER and sketches of the FIRST CHAPTER.

Thank you!

xoxo

Špela